RAGIL PONCO ARIWIBOWO, NIM: 2013-32-080

on Friday, 17 May 2013
Name                        : Ragil Ponco Ariwibowo
NIM               : 2012-32-080
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AUGUST RUSH

The most inspiring character in the August Rush movie is .This is a story of a August Rush . Lyla is a renowned and beautiful cellist and Louis is a guitar player and vocalist at a club. Lyla and Louis fall in love once they meet each other following the music Since they have different lives, they have to separate without seeing each other again. However, Lyla has had their baby - Evan, a prodigy born to music. Lyla has an accident and bears the baby but Lyla's father gives the baby to an orphanage without telling her, for fear of affecting her career.

After that, both Louis and Lyla give up their music careers Eleven years later, poor little Evan believes that his parents are waiting for him and goes to New York to find them. In New York, his musical gift leads him to success but also gives him some trouble. A monger uses Evan to make money and prevents him from achieving success.
One wonderful crowd dark peppy night there was an enormous phenomenal classical music concert in a big circle garden which has many kinds of beautiful flower. Leyla decided to perform there and she believed that she would meet her beloved child there. When she finished her performance and left the resplendent superb big stage coloring by colorful shining light suddenly she heard a beautiful reverberating rhythmical melody from the big stage. Without her knowing, Louise was also there. Both of Leyla and Louise tried to find the source of the sweet sound.

 He escapes and runs into a church and people there are surprised by his gift and send him to the best music school, Juilliard. There he receives an education where his genius is recognized, and he creates his composition - August Rhapsody in C major. At the same time, Lyla and Louis both begin to play music again and Louis returns to New York. Because of his perfect performance, Evan is granted an opportunity to play his music in Central Park in front of thousands of people. There are three composers featured, of which he is the last; his mother is the cellist in the preceding performance. Finally Leyla and Louise met right in front of the resplendent superb big stage. Then they looked at a handsome incredible smart little boy with beautiful bright round blue eyes who lead a music performance on the splendid stage. He looked and smiled to them happily. He was their amazing great talented boy named Evan Taylor who had been a famous composer in his very young age.  As Evan is conducting the orchestra in his rhapsody, Lyla and Louis come to the concert following the music again. The family finally get together!

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1.      . Lyla is a renowned and girl who beautiful always cellist .
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‘’always      = complement adj’’
‘’a               = pointer’’
‘’beautiful   = descriptive factual’’
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2.     Lyla a both begin to play music again and and girl who genius returns to New York.
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‘’play                             = verb’’
‘’girl                     = head word’’
‘’genius                = discribe factual’’
‘’to New York      = preposition’’
‘’a                        = pointer’’


3.  Evan have a good attitude it is from mother and father who is kind person.
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“and            = konjunction’’

4.     Evan is smart body and he loves music a more than just the foods.
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“and       = konjunction’’
“loves     =adjective’’
“smart    = describe factual’’
“the        =articles’’
“a           =pointer’’
“music    =head word’’

5.     He lived in an young clever house with his father.
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“an         =pointer’’
“young   =discribe factual’’
“house    =head word’’
“with his father         = preposition’’
“clever    =discribe factual’’


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